-There is nothing wrong with the feminism vibe or the revenge theme in our opening sequence. That's a plus.
-However there is a problem is the sexuality and kissing. Not only will this create conflict with the two actors, but also with the fact that it will not look very realistic.
-Make it a little bit more exciting. Make it more of a thriller!
-Last but not least, do not make the girls want to "out-boy" boys. Make up a new way to kill him. In other words, stabbing someone with a knife is a very manly thing to do. Spice it up a little bit by using a new, more girly way to kill the man.
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